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hoines
Photo Information
Copyright: Jeff Sandquist (atarisphoto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 258 W: 4 N: 102] (960)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-29
Categories: Event, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: NIKON D 70, Nikkor AF 18-70 mm, B+W UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-25 10:12
Viewed: 366
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is Hans Eric and Debra Hoines. I know Debra from college where she attended the nursing program with my fiance. She is also a fellow photographer. She asked me to shoot her wedding because she was trying to save money and liked my work even though I have never officially shot a wedding before.

This idea was one I took from a friend who will be shooting my wedding this summer. I am pretty inexperienced with Photoshop and just recently downloaded the trial version of Elements 6. This was the best that I could come up with using my limited skills. Any workshops to correct the color or tilt would be much appreciated even though I don't mind how this turned out. As you can see it was an overcast day.

Shot in RAW/NEF and processed in Nikon's ViewNX. Added frames and slight crop in Photoshop Elements 6.


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  • prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 98 W: 68 N: 75] (436)
  • [2008-04-25 14:25]

Hi Jeff,
I think you did an excellent job with these wedding photos, a creative idea for the composition. A nice touch of colour to the overcast day and excellent depth of field on the flowers with the out of focus couple in the background. My only criticism would be that I feel the pictures can be rotated slightly counter-clockwise as the horizon is not quite straight and the newlyweds appear to be falling over! A job well done anyhow!
Roxanne

I really like this one. Nice work.

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