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Four straight days of rain


Four straight days of rain
Photo Information
Copyright: Shelly OBrien (ShellyOB) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 268 W: 52 N: 687] (2969)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-16
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70s, Sigma 70-300 D macro
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): "Beyond my control !!!", Incredible Bokeh [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-03-16 18:05
Viewed: 353
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It has been the grayest, gloomiest, rainiest few days I've seen in ages. The poor birds are even drenched. I have been getting things ready to feed them (although in summer I guess that's kind of ... umm, unnecessary?) But I've bought mixed seed and sunflower seeds and even made my own suet cakes. From what i have seen so far, i believe they like them. A BUNCH. I had some scraps and just sprinkled them on the ground and I have seen more kinds of birds. I love it.

I could probably have cropped this in a bit closer, but i like the tree silhouette in the BG. Hope you enjoy it.

Fortuna, Beger, timtim, shaukatmi, Teresat, shelbeesmom, MLINES has marked this note useful
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Hello Shelly,

Lovely composition with great background and excellent foreground with a beautiful bird!
Congratulations and TFS.
Sergio

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3430 W: 816 N: 4592] (20685)
  • [2009-03-16 18:32]

Hi Shelly,
This composition is perfect. A closer crop would have ruined this mood! How this little bird seems a courageous fighter despite this rainy day! Excellent DOF showing a great acuity on the bird and an interesting blurred background.
Very good photo! Annie

Hi Shelly. I like the composition as is. Thus looks beaurtifulwith some rain drops and the tree silhouette. Good job with nice sharp image of this beautiful sparrow.

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 566 W: 11 N: 1087] (4376)
  • [2009-03-16 19:39]

Hi Shelly,
I really like the way you composed this shot. I agree with you regarding the silhouetted tree in the BG. The falling rain drops are well captured and the details in the bird are wonderful. Very nice work.
Regards,
Kevin

Very beautiful bird and photography. My suggestions is to crop this beautiful picture.

Bom dia Shelly
I love this rain of yours.
a special photo.
My regards
teresat

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 698 W: 2 N: 128] (3554)
  • [2009-03-17 1:26]

good capture
good composition
nice rainy shot
nice to see

The rain and shallow DOF works well! Good catch!

Hi Shelly, great shot. I love the mood of this shot - I can really feel (and almost hear and smell) the rainy day mood. Love your long crop, and the visible rain drops. Excellent job!
Trudy

Hi Shelly..this is a wonderful shot..perfectly composed..great tones...nice work.

Roger

This is awesome Shelly! A perfect catch! We also had 4 miserable days of cold rain...but we SO needed it! We were so dry we were under a fire warning! This is very nice and sharp! Nice bokeh!
B-)
Linda

Very cute! These birds are obviously a touch of colour and life in an otherwise drab winter. You have used it well to bring some joy to this shot too.

I love the bokeh of that background, beautifully rendered!

Rew

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1361 W: 100 N: 1056] (8757)
  • [2009-03-17 22:44]

Hi Shelly, A well balanced and attractive composition of this rather wet-looking bird. The story with it makes it into a fine contribution. TFS. Murray.

wow! beautiful! a lonely bird under the rain. simply dramatic Shelly.

tfs

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