Put it on my bill !!

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• maxloxton (2798)
• [2006-04-25 22:35]
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Beautiful. You have worked hard over the shot and it is evident. Nice colors and good shot. Keep it up. What is the name of the bird?

Regards
Yasir Nisar

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• fedburin (358)
• [2006-04-25 23:03]
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I like this photo. The expression on the bird is great. I feel that you were a little heavy handed on the cropping and lost some image detail and as a result the bird's head doesn't look sharp but otherwise great photo :).

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• Sans1 (0)
• [2006-04-26 9:44]
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Hi Connie - what a bill and big eyes this bird has! Great capture- I like the colors and the shallow DOF! Good seeing a new post from you! keep them coming!

best wishes,
Steve

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• james (392)
• [2006-04-27 1:26]
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your doing good, just have to work on getting crisp focus. pp work is good. well done..james

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• chocolate29 (2697)
• [2006-04-28 9:52]

Hi Connie - Cool perspective here. Nice colours and details of feathers. Good PP work. Wondering about the sharpness of eyes and beak, though. Guess you focussed more on the breast? Well done!
Cordelia

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• ScottHale (136)
• [2006-04-28 19:11]

Connie,
Welcome to Trek Lens. I found your page through your husbands. It looks like photography runs in the family!
the beak on this guy looks like a platypus bill! Strange....good capture.
I like the fact that James makes you type out notes, they complete the post and make things more interesting. You'll find if you critique someone elses work, they'll take a good look at yours. They will read ALL your notes....and take how much you put into it when they critique your shot and will be able to help you technically. Good bird shot, look at that stare!!!
Scott

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• sufi (1336)
• [2006-05-01 17:19]

Hi Connie...
Wonderful look and perfect bird portrait photograph... The colors and composition are also perfect... He look like angry...
TFS...
Stay well..
Salim.

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• suzley (6786)
• [2006-05-08 9:46]

Hello Connie


Long live notes...... we need um.

As already stated,a very good shot but the sharpness is a little lacking, other than that the subject is a very good and interesting one with a good natural left sid eframing. Please keep them coming ok.

Stv.