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I'm asleep
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Copyright: Gary Slocum (appalcarp) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1234 W: 173 N: 634] (4188)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-07
Categories: Nature
Camera: HP Photosmart R707
Exposure: f/3.5, 30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-01-06 22:11
Viewed: 1017
Points: 23
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Caught this snake at the zoo a year and a half ago sleeping in this most unusual position so I took a pic. It's a tree snake of some kind.

PP--crop out uninteresting things, resize, sharpen, dark and contrast quite a a bit.

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Love the pose you have caught. The sharpening and contrast have worked well and it looks great on a simple background.
I like zoo photographs and you have captured him well

Lizzie

Hello Gary. Hard to figure out from the thumbnail but a great shot of this snake! Very unusual and interesting. Well caught.
TFS. Cheers, Pat.

Hi Gary,
I am always intriqued by the way this snake sleeps. You captured his pose perfectly. But, it is too obvious that you shot this through glass and in a dark environment. There is a lot of noise and a lot of haze visable. A noise reduction and a adjustment on levels is needed.
TFS,
Niek

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  • miau Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 0 N: 59] (3602)
  • [2007-01-07 12:44]
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Très belle photo Gary!
J’aime surtout la couleur du serpent qui ressort bien sur l’arrière plan.
Bravo!
Michel.

Fascinant, autant la photographie par ces couleurs et la position du serpent.
Endormi ? Alors pourquoi il me regarde, je vois son oeil ouvert, enfin si tu le dis et puis je préfère le croire car je n'aime pas l'animal en lui-même.
TFS

Very nice shot. sharpness is missing, but it does not change the interest toward the subject. Thanks for sharing.

Very nice capture of this subject. Like the contrast and colours. Nice DOF and compo.

Cheers:)
Roy

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  • AB- Gold Star Critiquer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 6] (723)
  • [2007-01-18 10:07]
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Scary, but very interesting shape of the snake! Nice shot

The coposition is nice, Thank you for sharing

ben

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2660 W: 74 N: 4737] (21560)
  • [2007-02-14 9:26]
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Hello Gary... That's a very nice snake, (like lake mine), great colours, composition, and look excellent.
George

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  • arti Gold Star Critiquer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 2] (3678)
  • [2007-03-16 8:58]
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I like this picture Gary.
It is great to see a snake like that, green color is so nice and the position original.
Thank to share.
Best regards.
André

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4712)
  • [2007-09-08 16:28]

Hi Gary
I presume it does'nt suffer moreover of bad digestion or of pulmonary emphysema!!
Quite a spectacular pose and color.
Best regards.
Robert

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