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28th Floor


28th Floor
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Copyright: Pierre Richer (tournesol) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2095 W: 263 N: 1532] (12862)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-13
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon PowerShot S400
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-08-02 7:38
Viewed: 663
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This architectural beauty in the downtown area of Memphis is currently an empty shell. For a few minutes at sunset, it showed its old glory...

PP Notes:
- A bit of Curves adjustment;
- Cropping and perspective adjustment;
- Smart Sharpen

Enjoy!

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Great detail colour and light - love the way the building splits the frame and provides a very different pov.

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27939)
  • [2006-08-02 7:51]
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Ça aurait pu être ordinaire mais ça ne l'est pas. Tu as su mettre cette architecture en valeur grâce à ta composition fort agréable et que dire de ce ton orangé d'un jour qui s'achève !

Hi Pierre,

Nicely captured and well composed. The lighting is great and the colors are beautiful. Excellent work.

Mike

Beautifully captured it is pleasing to my eyes, well done Pierre. Cheers.

Thanks,
Jeffrey

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2006-08-02 9:21]
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Waiting for this moment is worth the time. Mystic colours appear; Great shot, not only by the colours but also by the long stretched shapes in this building. I like the steps-like crop you made.
Thanks Pierre
Huub

Hi Pierre,

This shot is lovely. The detail in the architecture is great here as is the buildings warm colouring. Nice work!

John

Beau contrast en tout!
Ciel état gazeux building état solide.
Ciel couleurs neutre Building plus criant
Et contraste des couleurs en soit...
LE couché rend le building vif en effet!

Bonjour Pierre, superbe image, on sent tout de suite la couleur des rayons de soleil couchant qui donnent à cet édifice uun lustre particulier. ta composition très graphique ajoute encore à la force de l'image!
Patrick

Hi pierre
Your works(all) are so great,
But I don't have enough time to critique one by one.
And about your current photo:really a good tele work,
With no perspective in lines.
It really likes a painting.
And thanks for your commenting on my picture...

Very nice vertical composition. The lighting on the building is superb. I see a little bit of quality lacking, but I noticed you used your 'other' pocket friendly camera. (This is meant to be a joke). Good work on the perspective adjustment.

Hi Pierre,

That warm golden lighting has really enhanced the buildings structure! Those vertical lines are really dominant!

Well seen & composed
Constantinos

nice composition and deep colors. I like the contrast of blue and orange, they always go together well. Nicely seen.

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3572 W: 737 N: 2406] (19090)
  • [2006-08-03 5:13]

Wow, great lighting, colours and compo.
Congratulations Pierre !!!


thanks and stay well,
v

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1856] (10317)
  • [2006-08-03 7:27]

Salut Pierre,
La lumière est tellement importante dans les photos et peut changer completement l'allure de celle-ci. Ici tu as mis en valeur cette belle architecture en utilisant le coucher de soleil qui lui donne des couleurs superbes. Très bien réussi.
Luc

The lighting is very warm and gives the colors a nice vivid look. Nicely composed and good detail/
TFS,
Vassilis

Hi Pierre
the sunset light against the building is just beautiful, this is a terrific shot.
I love it
Thanks for sharing it Buddy

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-08-06 6:20]

wow Pierre, impressive composition! the colours are amaizing... very good eye! congrats!

anca

incredible light here, Pierre!!!!

Salut Pierre,
very simple but effective compo with a special colour application by our sun.
Well seen and done. TFS Thomas

Your composition makes the viewer feel as if the building goes on forever. Lovely light too.

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2006-08-09 14:31]

Nice work Pierre, high impact structure and colours. Vertical and diagonal lines blend nicely, and your composition leaving in the blue sky makes it a great shot. Very nicely done,
Sam

Hi Pierre, I like the architecture here on your close-up on the builging and making it look like stairs.

Very well done and nice golden colour! Cheers, Yan :)

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  • nonna Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 92 W: 29 N: 66] (446)
  • [2006-08-19 12:55]

Pierre,
I love architectural shots and you have presented a wonderful POV in this one. Lovely warm glow - too bad mother nature didn't offer a up a better contrast in the blue of the sky.

bonjour Pierre, belle lumiere de fin de journee, j'aime bien la compo en 'escalier' et le rappel de toutes les petites fenetres, tres graphique et pas en meme temps!
A-Fr

Colours mix and composition working together to create very good image, is one of your recent images I like more.

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