The Red Line

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• Donnie (92)
• [2008-01-31 18:36]

Interesting subject matter, very nicely composed and captured with wonderful shadows.

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• farradhim (1362)
• [2008-01-31 18:57]
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although i have no idea of what this may be, I do agree this red line looks good, the play of shadow adds a nice touch.
Jacline

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• jstewart (524)
• [2008-01-31 22:54]

Very cool. I think its a bit too empty on the right side and you could crop off some of to make it even more of a dramatic composition.
John

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• rewshearer (20942)
• [2008-02-01 0:38]
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Great capture ... I can't help thinking there was some post-processing here, though, perhaps some blur or diffuse glow added? Or is it darkroom/ in-camera effects?

Rew

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• Silvio2006 (42703)
• [2008-02-01 6:35]

Hi Steven, fascinating abstract composition with superb graphic, very well done, ciao Silvio
PS May be better if you post at 800 pixel:)

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• milas (32821)
• [2008-02-01 8:16]

Hi Carter...
nice shot and detail..bravo..
selamlar

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• juulbaars (3889)
• [2008-02-02 1:04]

its like an abstract art work
well done

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• amcolli (1258)
• [2008-02-02 9:37]

jolly nice posting!
nice composition
well rendered the disomogeneity of the white

ciao
anna

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• pdp (538)
• [2008-02-07 13:01]

Hi Steven, you have some nice shots in your gallery. I like this one but I agree with the earlier poster about the right hand side. I think having the red pipe more to the right and incorporating more stairs would be good. Well done, good shot.