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Delphine


Delphine
Photo Information
Copyright: Sothy Eng (sothy81) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 13 N: 63] (649)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-08
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 350 D, Canon EF 200mm f/2.8L USM
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-15 17:55
Viewed: 278
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A friend of my Delphine. She is French. She did her Master degree in Texas Tech in Languistics. She is such a great model. Her postures are so natural. Easy to work with her. She has a dream of becoming a professional model. Hope she will some days.


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To rewshearer: Rewsothy81 1 05-15 23:49
To papajoehermit: Joesothy81 1 05-15 23:46
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Great shot, I really like the framing created with her arms. Great detail and light around her face. It does seem just a touch hot around her right elbow. TFS

Lovely model. The pose is strong and confident. Her eye contact is direct. The catchlights in her eyes are amazing.

However the light elsewhere doesn't look so good in my humble opinion. It is very strong on her right arm - our left - to the point that it has washed out the skin textures. It was also evidently very strong down the right edge of the frame, where you have used considerable post work to try and darken it.

I know your work and I know how meticulous you are with your photos, so I'm guessing this was a shot that you wanted to save and share no matter what. :)

Rew

Regardless of the previous comments I think this is a very BOLD portrait. All elements point to the face, which is very important when you have such a beautiful model. Personally I would have liked more information on the type lighting, i.e., available, flash, bounce, etc. Lighting MAKES the photograph. You did great in that department. Thank you for posting.

JoeGoff, Louisville, KY

Great shot, I liked the composition of the photo.. Hands and Face look little bit over exposed to me.. but it does not take any thing from this good snap..

Regards,
Sachin

  • Great 
  • woh (15)
  • [2009-05-15 23:44]

Elle est trop belle

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1364 W: 0 N: 1663] (13507)
  • [2009-05-16 4:20]

I simply must admit it,I love women....
Thanks Sothy.

jan

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