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Iron Man
Photo Information
Copyright: sm wa (swallace) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 8 N: 303] (2059)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-01-08
Categories: Experimental, Abstract
Camera: Olympus C-750UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-12 10:10
Viewed: 985
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was an experiment. In the "Pot of Gold" you can see the Gas Well equipment in the distance. There are large grey tanks that make excellent backdrops for photos. This is my hand, I was holding the camera in the other hand, and using the grey tank as a backdrop. The title of the photo came from the writing on the wristband of my watch.

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  • Great 
  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2005-04-12 11:31]

Hey Stephen,
I don't know if I like the wristband, but I really like the very "strong" pose of your hand as well as the colour, making it rough !
I also added this Black Sabbath-title to the theme:-))

Lumière magnifique qui aide a rendre une qualité d'image impeccable.....
Les détails sont saisissants...
Le sépia rend justice à la grande "optique" de votre appareil.
Photos,photos,photos.......Claude

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2005-04-12 13:00]

Nice shot Stephen...and nice hands. Soft and strong, as should be ;-). I don't mind the wrist band actually. It is good to have another focus point. You coudl try and squeeze teh hand tighter too and see what that does for the feeling. You will notice quit a difference in teh feling i think. Right now it is still freindly as it is a "soft fist". A tighter fist will be come much more thretening. Good as is though, just a suggestion for another experiment :-).

Wow
Great composition.
Very nice sharpness and lighting
Congratulations Stephen

I like this strong pose of the hand. The wristband adds some extra interest. I like it a lot. Good imagination Stephen. The camera seems to have focused more on the top portion of your hand. Would have been nice if the focus was more in the middle, but this is still a GREAT shot, with nice colours and tones.

Great detail and contrast, nice frame as well.

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