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Stairway to Heaven


Stairway  to Heaven
Photo Information
Copyright: Shelby Morris (shelbee) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 71 N: 629] (4290)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Decisive Moment, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-F717
Exposure: f/2.1, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-02 18:26
Viewed: 370
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Stairway to Heaven
This is a stairway leading to a restaurant on the San Antonio riverwalk. We went up to San Antonio for a choir trip and I saw this and had to stop and take a picture while the rest of my group kept walking!
Desaturated all but the pots
Sharpened
Resized
Clarified
Cropped out some odd looking people in the lower left corner
Thanks for your comments
Shelby

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Nice capture - good composition and good use of the selective saturation. You could possibly have made better use of the lead-in or corner-to-corner connections, although this is certainly eyecatching.
My biggest complaint would be about the photo's title ... I have a pet hate of that one because it is used so so so often for photos of stairs! (Search it and you'll see what I mean.)
TFS
Rew

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 106 N: 564] (9598)
  • [2007-05-02 18:40]

nice PP
good comp

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  • peetol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 589 W: 66 N: 698] (5743)
  • [2007-05-02 19:10]

Great leading lines, Shelby. The desaturated BG made it even more evident. Nice sharpness as well. Thanks for sharing!

Pierre

Hi Shelby - I agree with Rew about the overly-cliched title, but that shouldn't detract from the shot and pp work.

You've done well keeping the pots in isolation and i like the way the staircase and the palm tree combine to break up the image. I wonder if I may have cropped in a little from both the top and right, though - that may have made the pots more prominent as they are in a little danger of getting lost.

Interesting shot though, well done.

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4079)
  • [2007-05-03 7:36]

beautiful pic Shelby
great work
excellent pov
David

NIce Shot Shelby! Love the pots being in color! Yeah, the title is a bit cliche'd... you should ask your mama about it....... I would have named it Pot Roast myself!
B-)
Good shot, as always!
Mom
I'll be back........

Hi Shelby,
Busy...but very attractive. Very good PP work. excellant tonal range in the B&W and leaving the pots colored adds a nice touch. Excellant compo and good title. Nice work Shelby TFS!

Lyndon

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1318 W: 47 N: 2926] (16832)
  • [2007-05-03 11:21]
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Hello Shelby:)
I think that is in the area where Planet Hollywood is located... anyway I love that place in San Antonio.
Great composition you made here and lovely colour selection.
Great idea for this capture.
Only some how you have mistake in photo location description, you wrote Houston:)))
'll back with :) Tom

hi shelby, this is a neat shot, i like the black and whire eefect with a splash of color in it, nicely presented, cheers, scott

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1442 W: 275 N: 2015] (12398)
  • [2007-05-03 16:34]

Hello Shelby.
Very creative composition. Stairway looks effective. Good perspective as well. Stairway to Heaven? Looks like ;)
Compliments.
Janek J-23

Lovely tones Shelby and excellent PP work to create them. Well composed with strong diagonals. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Belated Birthday...’

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2007-05-04 9:43]

It seems like this heaven is for color blinds.... haha.

Nice presentation in color and monochrome composition. An exciting point of view and good luminar control. Well done Shelby.

Thanks for sharing this image.

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