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• ScottHale (136)
• [2009-08-01 8:43]
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Tex,
I'm the first who viewed this....I don't mind the power pole on the bottom because it gives us some sense of scale, although the pilot is almost ready to blast out of this photo. I would think if you placed it lower in the frame that you'd actually portray this more as a landing.
The cockpit of the plane is awkwardly too far on the top right of this photo. good size, focus and the colors seem to be there.....
Scott

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• SunToucher (6919)
• [2009-08-01 9:29]

Hi Esteban,
A very odd composition where the planes almost looks like its hanging from the ceiling of the frame. It looks like you croped it this way on purpose but I don't understand why.
Also, the photo is badly exposed, making the whites look dull and the sky flat. Try to adjust the levels to find your black and white point.
I hope this isn't one of your 50 photos made in automatic mode, because then your answer to my question is wrong.
Niek

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• Sharpshooter (6922)
• [2009-08-01 11:29]
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Hi Esteban,
Looks like a clear shot, but the crop is all wrong. The plane is far too tightly cropped, giving it no room to 'move into'. You need alot more negative space towards the right, and less negative space down the bottom. Doesn't really work for me in it's current state to be honest.

Scott.

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• trampas (7027)
• [2009-08-01 14:44]

you have been away but, still, you haven't learnt by your mistakes.

this suffers badly from poor composition. the 'plane is too close to the edge and the negative space does nothing but annoy.

try to learn from those who wish to help.

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• Leica (2127)
• [2009-08-02 17:39]

You defeat all rules of composition. I respect your nerve but don't you wish it would work? Thanks for the chuckle. ;o)