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Running down a Dream
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Esteban Stipnieks (Texan)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 522 W: 49 N: 1]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-n.gif) (22) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-07-28 |
| Categories: Transportation |
| Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2009-08-10 9:53 |
| Viewed: 247 |
| Points: 1 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Christian Ruiz departs for New Jersey 03 San Antonio International AIrport |
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Tex,
It looks like the wheels are touching the tarmac, not departing for New Jersey. I think waiting another second to take this photo might have helped you. I had to wipe my eyes a couple of times to makes sure it really was out of focus. I like your placement of the aircraft within the frame but the background makes it hard to separate the aircraft in the foreground from the background. It's kind of busy. I can't believe that you know the name of this plane...do they name all of their planes?
I hope I've given you some insight into how to correct this photo.
Scott
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Hey there
I did a ws
just to make it look better
but it is up to you whether you like it or not.