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Tower
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Copyright: Karen Smith (karith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1173] (7421)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-27
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Canon Rebel XTi 400D, 17-85 mm 1:4-5.6 IS USM, Hoya 67mm HMC UV(0)
Exposure: f/8, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Architecture and Structures [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-29 5:54
Viewed: 331
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a tower left behind at an abandoned naval base across the bay from San Francisco. I didn't have to deal with any traffic or people in the way to get this shot.

PP: made standard adjustments to RAW image, resized, sharpened, added border.
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Nicely seen and captured Karen,
I am always amazed by these artifacts around the Bay area
days gone by of old military bases.
I haven;t seen this one before.
Great blue sky. I see you are taking advantage of the great weather we had this past weekend!
- Vincent

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2008-04-29 8:56]

Hi Karen,
I like much this low-angle shot! This pOV gives a great dynamic lines at the photo. The play of shadows and light draws a beautiful graphical design on this structure. Very well seen and done. Bravo! Annie

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  • lali Gold Star Critiquer [C: 131 W: 5 N: 5] (449)
  • [2008-04-29 10:46]

Une belle lumière,la prise de vue met bien en valeur les lignes,
TFS,aline.

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1289 W: 69 N: 1538] (7679)
  • [2008-04-29 11:54]

Hi Karen
Probably lots of stuff sitting around on the old base. POV well selected - tipping the tower through the image works well. Bright blue sky provided good contrast.

Dan

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2025 W: 144 N: 3404] (13633)
  • [2008-04-30 0:50]

hi Karen

The perfect blue sky is a nice contrast for you to capture the framed tower in white and doing a good composition here. Nice work.

tfs, bill

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  • Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 147 N: 811] (4866)
  • [2008-04-30 23:47]

Hi Karen

Very good POV and composition.
Well spotted and captured.

Regards Derek

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