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Abandoned


Abandoned
Photo Information
Copyright: Karen Smith (karith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1173] (7421)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-27
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Mood
Camera: Canon Rebel XTi 400D, 70-300mm 1:4-5.6 IS USM, 58mm HOYA UV(0)
Exposure: f/16, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Architecture and Structures [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-30 5:45
Viewed: 391
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is one of the empty buildings left behind when the navy closed its base in the San Francisco area. Some of the buildings are gradually being reinhabited by businesses or other enterprises. It was hard to tell what might be in store for this one.

PP: standard RAW adjustments, resized, sharpened, added border.
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I like how you twisted it Karen. Well done.
Dennis

getting better & better, Kari. simple and remarkable, interesting irregular pattern, slight tilt, great matching framing. Good show.
Janos

Hello, Karen -
Great graphic image. I like the tilted POV. Good colors and sharpness, and good eye to see this shot.

Dear Karen!
Very original shot. Very sophisticated composition.
Interesting frame.
Cheers!

Hello Karen,
I like the perspective. Very sharp and clear image. The frame is nice too.
Regards,
Sharina

AH I thought there would be more. Is that location open to the public or did you climb the fence? Angle works here and the missing windows tell the story.

Dan

Hello Karen,
very atractive, very simple and interesting.
Nice colours and framing.
Regards Caesar

  • Great 
  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 558 W: 52 N: 1139] (4661)
  • [2008-04-30 15:43]

Hi Karen
Well seen, good capture, original and well presented.
Greetings
Jens.

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