<< Previous Next >>

Blue City


Blue City
Photo Information
Copyright: Vincent James (machinelove) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1348 W: 71 N: 3545] (16007)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-03-15
Categories: Nature, Architecture, Experimental, Mood
Camera: Canon EOS XSi 450D, Canon EF 24-105 f/4L IS USM
Exposure: f/16, 8 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-16 16:21
Viewed: 267
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Pure experimental fun. I was out on the shore of the San Francisco Bay last night just as the recent rainstorm passed. Downtown San Francisco is on the horizon. I settled down near a Eucalyptus tree and shot a few exposures at varied shutter speeds. Back home I merged them in Photomatix into an HDR, then converted to b/w with a blue tint in Silver FX Pro. Then I applied a Sketch Action with a really low opacity in CS4 to create a little more texture.

I liked the mood in the final result so thought I would post it. Have a great week!

Kilted-Arab, shelbeesmom, mvdisco, Beger, lilimih33, kross1, Teresat, chrisJ has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
None
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Hi Vincent - almost looks like a scene from some post-apocalyptic world with the pp work you've done. OI like the use of the tree trunk in the foregound - it adds depth, perspective and some natural framing. Cool image.

Great experiment, Vincent. The tree in the foreground is really interesting with all of its tones and textures. Love the composition and the b&w conversion - it all conveys a strong mood. Well done.

Hello Vincent ,

Une photo expérimentale vraiment interessante .

On peut y voir la progression du bitume et du béton sur l'état de nature ou la constatation d'un monde uniforme et monochrome.

Bien vu

laurent

Hi Vincent,
Excellent POV well taken picture,
nice contrast and light,
Excellent deep of field well presented.
compliments
Michel

  • Great 
  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3287 W: 785 N: 4402] (19782)
  • [2009-03-16 18:52]

Hi Vincent,
This composition and your PP work give a surrealistic mood at this city! I like when an image cans tell us a story! The use of the tree in foreground places us in at the heart of action, hidden behind this tree, we could be spies about a psychologic war in this mysterious city! :)
I like much the depth and the faded blue tones!
Bravo! Annie

Hello Vincent!
Wonderful point of view and fantastic atmosphere!
Excellent the tone you choose!
Beautiful work!
Best regards!
Lili

  • Great 
  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 569 W: 11 N: 1087] (4376)
  • [2009-03-16 19:45]

Hi Vincent,
I really like this view of San Francisco and the way you composed the shot with the Eucalyptus tree in FG. The PP work is very creative and gives the picture a different but very cool look to it. Very nicely done/
Regards,
Kevin

Hello Vincent
Great composition and PP.
Congratulations.
Janusz

always amazed at the great PP work you guys do, truly incredible, this has a great somber mood, perfect composition and tones are incredible,
awesome work,
thanks,
scott

  • Great 
  • rudla Gold Star Critiquer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 7] (2772)
  • [2009-03-16 23:41]

I love it! Blue tones,great angle and the mood :)
Best regards,
V

Bom dia vincent
what a great begin to a story.
Very well composed...
Delicious....
My regards
Teresat

  • Great 
  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2009-03-17 1:19]

nice shot
good scape
nice one
good experimental

  • Great 
  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 0 N: 2349] (19434)
  • [2009-03-17 6:24]

Hello,

quel cadrage, la souche de cet arbre et en fond les superbe builinds, fantastique iamge, quel effet cela donne à l'ensemble, superbe.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

  • Great 
  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4182 W: 407 N: 6465] (41319)
  • [2009-03-17 6:30]

Hi Vincent

A superb result & it was strange to see so many eucalyptus trees (a native of Australia), in California. I felt right at home! A moody & atmospheric shot, with a superb tonal range. Tfs!

Hey..got interrupted last night before I could leave my critique! HAHA! I love this! The details on the FG and BG are great! Love that dramatic sky! Nice work on this! The blue tint is very nice also, it creates a mood!
B-)
Linda

Interesting pp Vincent - I like the silvery tone here.. The HDR merger has worked nicely and the composition is really very nice.. A good mix of rural v urban..

Good work
Rgds
David

  • Great 
  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-03-18 2:06]

hi Vincent

I find your new profile photo to be very good; please keep it stagnant for a long while! I really am puzzled why so many photographers are good but kept a below par profile photo?

A nice experimental shot of HDR view of the bay with the city in the BG. Sometimes it is experiments like these that make us learn more quickly.

tfs, bill

  • Great 
  • Kli Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 190 W: 17 N: 198] (1982)
  • [2009-03-18 12:48]

Bonjour Vincent,
J'ai vraiment l'impression d'être cachée derrière ce tronc et d'observer la ville au loin. Excellent POV.
Amicalement.

Pascalie.

Nice work, it gives the impression of a vast wall of ice or rock looming above the city; in fact with a little more playing around with aperture and composition you could almost have created that scenario!

Great job
Rew

  •      
  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3534 W: 723 N: 2378] (18883)
  • [2009-03-19 7:23]

Impressive, very impressive !

thanks,
v

  • Great 
  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1618 W: 118 N: 2771] (11196)
  • [2009-03-20 11:31]

Hello Vincent
This photo is simply amazing; the POV behind the tree in the left, and the difuse focus in the distance, is very cinematographic and reminds me a perspective of a «sniper» coming close to a city in a «post apocalyptic world». The atmosphere is a fantastic «gothic high-fantasy» emphasised by the blue tone and the dramtic sky and soft misty around the buidings.
Excelent. Vicent «Machinelove» at his best.
Have a great we, mb

  • Great 
  • tracer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 786 W: 45 N: 1578] (7868)
  • [2009-03-25 12:33]

i agree with the mood Vincent, one mighty fine mono conversion. contrast is excellent!

tfs

i a n

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF