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Pt. Lobos 2


Pt. Lobos 2
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Copyright: Karen Smith (karith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1065 W: 80 N: 1168] (7393)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-03
Categories: Nature, Mood
Camera: Canon Rebel XTi 400D, 17-85 mm 1:4-5.6 IS USM, Hoya 67mm HMC UV(0)
Exposure: f/16, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Pt. Lobos
Theme(s): Scenery and Places [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-09-11 19:16
Viewed: 395
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot taken at Pt. Lobos, just south of Carmel, along the California coast. Most of my recent vacation was taken up by a vicious cold, but I did manage to get out one day and shake off my cabin fever by driving the two hours it takes to get there and spending a few hours taking in the beautiful scenery and salty sea breezes.

PP: standard RAW adjustments, tweaked contrast/saturation/shadows, resized, sharpened, added border, converted to JPEG/TL ready, sharpened again.
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  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 160 W: 0 N: 85] (1066)
  • [2008-09-11 19:44]

Hi Karen,

Beautiful shot of the scene. I like the details and sharpness. Good PP and nicely composed.
Well done!

Regards,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

What a lovely POV here, Karen. Deep blue sea! :)
Love to play and swim there!
I like how you framed your shot with the natural elements as border. Some moire and white fringes on the branches atop due to jpeg compression but it's so very minimal.
TFS,
Freddie :)

Hi Karen,
What an amazing capture and perspective
Wonderful colors and effects
Have a nice weekends
Burak

Oh, what a pretty sight....the water seems to never end. Pretty natural framing too.
Tracy

Hi Karen
Simply a beautifully composed image with the natural framing - colors are vibrant. I agree with Freddie and think there may be one to many sharpening. Try going back to the original Raw image, do every thing the same, but eliminate the initial sharpening. Put them both on the monitor at 100% and see if there is a difference.

Dan

I agree with Daniel Karen, one sharpen only and that should be the final bit of PP. A lovely image regardless, nicely composed, good colour and fine detail,
David

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 10 N: 738] (10735)
  • [2008-09-12 19:05]

Hi Karen,
Lovely shot. Perfectly framed naturally with tree branches. Well done.
Sunil

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