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Mother & Fawn


Mother & Fawn
Photo Information
Copyright: Jafar Mohammadi (jazrr) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 72 N: 82] (1883)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-16
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D200., Nikkor 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G IF-ED AF-S DX
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-30 8:37
Viewed: 325
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 34
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Hi Jafar,
Beautiful subjects, beautiful colors, beautiful composition with marvellous sharpness and DOF!
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Hello Jafar,

You have chosen a very appealing subject and captured them with excellent details. I like your composition and well sarurated colours.

However, there are some strange highlighted areas around the animals. You do not give us any details but possibly you have been cloning and not just got it quite right.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Jafar!
Very sweet deers and beautiful green in your picture!
Strange blurred effect!
Nice frame, too!
Best regards!
Lili

seems your selection around the subject is a bit done too quickly, if you did it better i would call it a masterpiece, vivid, brilliant, with good idea to blur it (or simply DoF) and the presentation is excellent (square, frame)
regards
jc

  • Great 
  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2634 W: 1 N: 1253] (15397)
  • [2008-10-30 12:51]
  • [+]

Hola amigo,
bella captura y simpático momento...
buen foco y pov,
colores agradables,
saludos

Salam Jafar,

it's a pleasant image with lovely subjects and colours and the nice POV makes a good composition. subjects are nicely placed within the frame. it's so lovely indeed.

TFS
regards
Agoes

Hi Jafar,
Perfect composition and vivid green texture.
Excellent frame also. Blur effect adds depthness...
My compliments dear friend...
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi Jafar...
Beautiful shot with nice light...
Nice scene...
Have a nice weekend...
Andro

Hi Jafar
Beautiful vibrant colours and composition, it can be difficult sometimes to blur the background around subject such as these but with practice it gets easier, you have done a fine job, I love this photo.
TFS
Jude

Hello Jafar,
Wonderful capture with excellent clarity and great colors, very well done and TFS.
Regards
Atri

Salam Jafar
A great shot of these beauties. Excellent focus and DOF. Did you use blur brush to make a stronger bokeh on the background? TFS.
Regards, Alireza.

  • Good 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1493 W: 126 N: 2163] (19716)
  • [2008-11-02 12:00]
  • [+]

Hello Jafar! Very nice capture of these two deers. The composition is really well done and the light and colors are great. I think that what you did to the background wasn't a good idea though, it doesn't look natural. Thanks.

Mario

Was this taken on a golf course? That grass is great!
Nicely composed with fabulous light too!

Short cropped grass like that could indicate a golf course? A few notes would be helful but delightful shot. Good job.

Warm regards David

hi jafar
very lovely shot.I like that.colors are sharp and beautiful.

Hello Jafar

It's Bambi and his mom.
So tender !! So lovely little family
I love them

A very esthetic and elegant shot
Excellent for me.

  • Great 
  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 270 W: 20 N: 664] (3219)
  • [2009-02-26 4:53]

Hi Jafar,

Superb DOF and sharpness.
Brilliant wildlife capture.

Ramon

  • Great 
  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1677 W: 124 N: 1431] (20112)
  • [2009-03-15 1:40]

Hi Jafar,
what a lovely composition.What a peaceful place.I liked framing and green tones also.TFS.Necla.

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