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Carmel Beach, CA


Carmel Beach, CA
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Copyright: Shailesh Vyas (shaileshivyas) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 1 N: 22] (330)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 40D, canon 24-70/2,8 L
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-22 6:48
Viewed: 326
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken on 17 mile scenic drive near Carmel beach, CA. I wish I would have been able to take proper round sun for this image. I need to learn what kind of filters/techniques I should use to get round sun with similar kind of lighting.

HDR once again(merged 5 different exposures of same raw image and tome mapped)

PP:

Levels & Curves
NI
USM
Dodge and burn
Image resize
USM
save for web
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Good HDR work Shailesh. The composition, lighting, presentation and the supersaturated colors with the contrast and texture came out very well. The only thing is the image does not look real. I used to live in that area and the spot is near the Lone cypress tree. In other words it is a a good commercial post card. This is my humble opinion.

hi
fantastic shot of a wonderfull area i visited the drive a few years back and it is a lovely place you have certainley done it justice with this shot
regards bryan

beautiful shot
very nice pov i really like the composition
coilors and contrast

regards
Deepak

the sky is amazing, though a bit over sharpened on the foreground. but over all a clean HDR execution.
tfs

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A lovely shot.
Very nice light and sky. Perfect sharp and nice colors. Good picture, very good.
Best regards. Carme.

Hi Shailesh,

Beautiful sky detail,and your foreground acts as a good frame/lead in.
Try F22 with this kind of shot and you will get the star burst effect on the sun.

Douglas

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  • ade71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 37 N: 206] (2812)
  • [2009-01-22 10:06]

Hi S., wonderful shot, good POV and colours. Good PP processing! Compliments, Adele

This is very very beautiful picture! Wonderfull frame, colours, excellent PP work! As for me, it's just perfect!

TFS,
Sveta

very lovely outcome, Shailesh.
beautifully colours are nicely presented here. the POV is no less great! adorable!

Thanks for sharing
Regards
Agoes

Hello Shailesh:

You have a great shot here I don't see any way you can improve it with filters. Most filters will change the quality of light and you caught this photo at the end of day. Your shot is so perfect it does not need any correction.

Gary
San Pedro

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