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- kitflorendo
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1340 W: 0 N: 0]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif)
(0) - [2005-12-06 22:11]
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![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 88 W: 34 N: 58]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif){kind=small}
Hey Neeraj,
Good colors and cnstrast. There are few things:
1. The lighting is bit bright but at the same time the portion on left is loosing its visiblity.
2. One lesson I have learned is never cut those part in acomposition. The handle is out of the frame, would have looked much better with them inside frame.
3. Look the the tip on left... give some breathing space to your object.
4. Try placing your subject on a constrasting background.
Good capture otherwise.
Regards,
Shahid
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OK - no flowers. Good.
This one needs just a little more space, especially where the tip of the spout rests exactly on the frame edge. It would also have been better to include ALL the handle, maybe even folded down fully, either to the back but even to the front.
Compliments on the sharpness.