Special Moment

Critiques [Translate]

•  
• ilovebob (56)
• [2006-07-10 13:48]

Hi Jeff,
In short, I like the pose, and I think it could potentially make a great photo. However I'm not sure I like the central composition too much, and I think the photo could benifit from a slight contrast boost.
TFS

•  
• iso (27861)
• [2006-07-10 14:52]

I like it Jeff, a nice moment, maybe a bit more space on left.

•  
• cobratan (1240)
• [2006-07-10 15:09]

Great Capture and the color is okay.Like what they mention ahead of me it is too centered.Keep shooting:)
Mel

•  
• Aloys5268 (2756)
• [2006-07-10 16:40]

Jeff
Good shot. Beautiful.
Good compo.
Well done.
Aloys

•  
• perryhooter (27341)
• [2006-07-12 14:19]
• [2] [+]

Welcome to Treklens. I wish you a lot of fun with this nice bunch of photography lovers.....

You did the same mistake I did in one of my first posting (*_*) Check it out here . And see the WS I received here . Got the point ? Remember to off center your subject for a better composition. Therefore here , I would crop the space right of the rock completely.

Great colors , Great light! For the next time I would also recommend you to get down on your knees as well (^_^) to lower your POV in order to be at a better level. You would shoot than horzontally. This way , you would have captured both, the sea, the horizon, and most likely what they were looking at.(^_^)
Cheers!
Robert

•  
• gtinatl (1885)
• [2006-07-25 14:32]

I read your forum entry, I think this photo is fine, well composed and not at all an invasion of privacy....

Well done!

GT

•  
• graemann (5124)
• [2006-08-07 19:27]

Hello:

Read about the rule of third in photography? Well that should have been applied here. Anyway, this shot is just ok. But I hopw I could see the horizon. by you going down to the sand and positioning you camera for us to see the horizon. Hmm its a minor thing. Great detail though.

TFS.

•  
• annagrace (3421)
• [2006-09-05 15:31]
• [+]

Love this shot, a very tender moment. I would guess this is the babysitter, not the mother, based on her figure, LOL! Well done.

Alli

•  
• btokaz (5744)
• [2006-09-09 19:54]

Beautiful. Very good scene...
Tomasz

•  
• gunershot (20062)
• [2007-06-02 13:10]

Hi Jeff,
Perfect composition,
Meaningfull...
Thanks for sharing.
M.D.Seyfettin Güner.