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Fun at the Shoreline


Fun at the Shoreline
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Copyright: Daniel Bugarin (dbuggy74) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 1] (74)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-06-20
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon EOS 400D/Rebel XTi, Tamron 28-300mm XR Di f3.5-6.3
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-01 13:19
Viewed: 139
Points: 0
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  • Mitch Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 1 N: 158] (699)
  • [2009-07-11 7:23]

Hi Daniel,

Whilst a very sharp and well focused shot, the framing is all wrong.
A little too tightly cropped too.

Ideally, the stunt rider should have space to move into. He's falling "Out of the shot" and the tight cropping has the tyres cut from the bottom of the bike.

On a positive side,
The idea itself is a very good one, and like i say very well focused, with very good contrast and overall a clean sharp image.
Nice touch with the B&W conversion that makes the white T-shirt really stand out well in the shot.

Keep it up, and good luck with your new arrival in October.

Regards

Martin

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