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Copyright: GRACE STOUT (gracestout2008) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 351 W: 2 N: 289] (1982)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-11
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-02-04 8:56
Viewed: 222
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A colored photograph converted to black & white as there is a red mark on the girl's (left) eyeball (left) and i don't know how to retouch it. I will appreciate your honest and constructive opinion of this image and thank you very much in advance.

ABOUT MY PHOTO:
They are my friend's nieces and they are siblings. This image was taken at the Dinner Dance and they were not aware that i took this picture.

PP done:
Colored photograph converted to black and white;
cropped and resized;
cloned unwanted objects; and
put text.

GRACE STOUT

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To wilth: THANKS FOR YOUR HELP!gracestout2008 1 02-10 18:46
To MYLZ: YOU INSPIRED ME!gracestout2008 1 02-04 10:03
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  • Great 
  • MYLZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 78 W: 7 N: 43] (622)
  • [2009-02-04 9:10]
  • [+]

Another inspired photo came from the best photographer....Grace...

Great shot...
Great pretty model..
All of above..

TFS..
MYLZ

Hi Grace

Double portraits are very difficult to do well, even when they are aware that you're taking their photo - because you need to coordinate the direction of their eyes, and their expressions to match.

Here, you were lucky - both are smiling and both appear to be looking in the same direction.

I would be happy to give you some tips on PP work for this kind of thing - although if you used pop-up flash or direct camera flash, you will have problems anyway.

Keep shooting, I look forward to seeing more portraits from you!

hi Grace
the black and white realy suits this shot it is a loveley portrait and u have loveley models
regards bryan

Hi Grace,
Nice double portrait, nice and candid and well positioned.
As to the "red-eye", I tried a little red eye correction but reduced the size of the repair and targeted off-center so as to leave a little sparkle but a bit tamer reflection of the light in a workshop here. See what you think.
Thanks,
Wilt

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2284 W: 180 N: 0] (29414)
  • [2009-02-13 0:58]

Hiiii Grace ;)...how are you...
Wonderful positive faces, TFS
All the best,
J ;)

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