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Ascension


Ascension
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerry Hogsett (jhogsett) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 30 W: 2 N: 17] (200)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09
Categories: Architecture, Abstract
Camera: Canon Elan 7, Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM, Fuji Velvia 50, B+W 77mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-06-15 2:37
Viewed: 855
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The parking garage I park in every day in Palo Alto has this beautiful stone work one the outside. I'm endlessly fascinated by it, especially on a nice day like today.

The workshop image is the same but modified to remove a slight distracting element in the upper right as suggested by Richard/Shutter2Think

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To Shutter2Think: Posted a doctored versionjhogsett 4 06-17 16:16
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Hi Jerry,
Nice angle! Composition looks good, but, there's a small detail of the shape on the upper right corner, it distracts a little. But, the color and exposure looks good. I like the texture of the stone on this support...and the shadows it makes...and, I like how deep a blue the sky is.
Good work.
Richard

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