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Down by the Pond


Down by the Pond
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Copyright: Eric Caverly (caverlyen) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 25] (71)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-22
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Sony DSC F-717
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-23 16:32
Viewed: 303
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another in a series of people I have photographed. This one was outside again. I chose the spot cause of the contrasting colors. The flash was used as well as using natural light.

Please Critique as you see fit.

Thanks again
Eric
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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2676 W: 1574 N: 5166] (18793)
  • [2009-05-23 16:51]

Hello Eric,

Beautiful model.
Good shot.
TFS Sergio

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  • Leica Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 41 N: 60] (2107)
  • [2009-05-23 17:46]

The crop isn't working here. Note how you cut both of her hands off. Besides that the composition and subject placement is good.

Hi Eric...this is a nice shot of a pretty girl...The balance of the shot could be better if the right hand was resting on the girls knee or if the shot was extended to include more of the left leg and hand...keep it up...we are all getting better on this site.

Roger

Hello Eric,

I like the colour combination and the girl is pretty too. Having captured her entire body would have been better, I would say.
Thanks for sharing,
Esperança

The setting you guys chose for these were great! They put the finishing touch on it that makes it all that more professional! Great job

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