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"Marilyn" Hale Kola


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Copyright: Marilyn Vilaythong (MVilaythong) (4)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-16
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-18 21:22
Viewed: 128
Points: 4
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Welcome to TrekLens Marilyn

You have a beautiful model here and she poses and engages well with the camera.

Personally I'm not a fan of the softening technique you've used, and my understanding is that when it is used, it's best to mask off areas such as the eyes, lips, and hair rather than including them in the softening.

You may find that a Photographer's Note will help your photos attract comments and critiques - many members will not comment a photo without a Note, as they are considered both informative, and more polite. ;)

Rew

Ciao Marilyn, a great welcome on TL, splendid portrait with fantastic smile, wonderful expression, very well done, ciao Silvio
PS next time is beter if you add a note to your photo:)

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