Pedestrian Art

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• tournesol (12862)
• [2005-09-03 10:54]

Very nice work, André! You fooled me big time because I thought the painting was on the wall. It's a great idea to merge the two pictures. I might have cropped a bit the left side to leave only the brick wall, but again, I like it the way it is. Great job!

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• SylFondacci (14125)
• [2005-09-03 10:58]

I love the composition, André !
So simple and graphical, a great play with shadows and lights.
The woman's arm is on the same diagonal as the shadow ...
Great shot !
Sylvie

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• artabb (3078)
• [2005-09-03 11:18]

Very nice picture, nicely composed. The diagonal shadows adds something to the beauty of the picture

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2005-09-03 11:49]

Very nice composite image, Andre, and extremelly well done because we would not know it if you had not told us in your note. I like all of the elements in it - the woman walking caught in movement, the shadow forming a triangular, your artwork on the wall. Well done!

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• iso (27893)
• [2005-09-03 13:35]

A nice one Andre. I like very much the shabows, it give an ambiance. I would give a little more light and accentuate the contrast, just a suggestion Andre. Well a goo subject.

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2005-09-03 13:35]

very nice compo Andre :)
good shadows

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• maleentjeh (66)
• [2005-09-03 14:59]
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Hi Andre, a beautiful composite. Magnificent work. An artwork made of an artwork !

Marleen

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2005-09-03 19:00]
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It is marvellous how you have combined both of your artful skills. I commend you for this good work. Very good PP work Andre'. The big diagonal shadow makes this scene extra interesting. My only suggestion would be to soften the edges of your artwork. Perhaps use a soft eraser brush at 50-75%. It is a good theatrical idea to have your name up on the wall. You have become famous in Reno :)

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• Limassol (782)
• [2005-09-03 21:12]
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Olá André!
Pretty work of composition that results in an image with rectilineas lines and obliquas.
Felicidades
antonio

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• law (1764)
• [2005-09-03 21:43]

This one is nice. I like the composition, Shadow & the lighting as well. Great details & texture at the background. Well done!
Lawrence

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• puffy (16617)
• [2005-09-03 22:19]

Very cleaver idea Andre, if you didn't explain it, I won't even know that is combine of two photo. Excellent pp work, very well done. Thanks for sharing. :D

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• ronrag (1281)
• [2005-09-03 23:16]

Hi Andre, this is street photography with a little touch of graphism or ISO-graphy! i'm beginning to like this style of yours - "the Andre way" kind of shots! :)

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• Shutter2Think (0)
• [2005-09-04 0:57]

Hi Andre,
Very cool montage. Nice composition. I like how you have her entering the frame. Also, nice timing...I enjoy how her hand is angled in a diagonal like the shadow on the wall...speaking of the shadow, I think it's a good thing it's there or your shot would feel too right side heavy where all the action is. Well seen.
Take care.
Richard

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• delnaja (0)
• [2005-09-04 4:35]
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nice composition André!
great work,
FRed

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• Talisman (3231)
• [2005-09-04 8:36]

Hey that's a great idea Andre! I'll try it one day too. I didnt realise it until I read ur note. Well done! Kudos on the creative idea! Bravo!

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• mikoyen (5263)
• [2005-09-04 9:44]

Beautiful picture Andre, with the colors on the wall and the shadow, and the woman walking by, perfect all the way. I like it a lot. I just see it, your name on the wall, letters missing give the impression it was writen on the wall. Very clever my friend, I like that.
Best regards
Guy

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• agrimace (260)
• [2005-09-04 23:14]

Inspiration.

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• gaylen54 (0)
• [2005-09-05 0:05]

Very, very nice work, Andre! So, you are an artist too?! Such interesting shapes here, nice lighting, movement, and compo! You've done well!

Gayle

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• ynnad (1008)
• [2005-09-06 2:48]
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you have it Andre.. the art and skill... really good job here.

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• tanbinh (3156)
• [2005-09-08 9:22]

exellente composition!
good moment decisif!
bye....tanbinh.

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2005-09-11 5:04]

Good work Andre,
Nice PP and very creative idea. Indeed the merge of two pictures is a very interesting concept and you developed it well

Congrats!!

take care, Stef :))

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• nova (8651)
• [2005-09-23 22:01]

Beautiful colors and great composition! Absolutely well done! Bravo! Michel

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• Attila (0)
• [2005-11-14 13:08]

Oookay... so here's my theory of art question to you as an architect and photographer: wouldn't you like to do your own real graffiti or street art? Wouldn't you like this pic to be really on that wall? I personally find this appealing despite the fact that my 'civilized' part tells me not to 'vandalize' other peoples' property...

I am really interested in an honest answer, my friend!

;)