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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-06-10 19:45]
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I also love watching the facial expressions and exchanges between musicians when they are performing or practicing. You can tell they love what they do and they understand each other's passion for music. Really wonderful to make this in black and white to make it timeless, and really nice contrasts and tones created with the desaturation. I love the tilt you used to take the shot because it adds character to the shot and has us focus on the man's facial expression near the left. Very good clarity and detail and great focus. I might recommend not cropping the head of the guitar at the right edge or cropping too much of the guitar case at the bottom edge since I think it breaks the continuity of the shot. Otherwise an excellent capture and great point of view showing the right-hand musician in slight profile (maybe seeing a slight bit more of his expression would help) and the left-hand musician's priceless expression. Very unique, TFS!
-Lara

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• Mirra78 (4912)
• [2007-06-11 1:45]

Very nice shot, you've taken a great moment.
Nice frame and tones.
Regards
Izabela