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Two pair


Two pair
Photo Information
Copyright: Dayna Dennis (daynaken) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-08-13
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Experimental, Portrait
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), Canon 18-55mm .028m/0.9ft
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-08-16 0:05
Viewed: 412
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I feel this is my best macro yet. I hope the clarity stays throught he upload. Hand held
PP- cropped, framed and resized.
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GREAT...
SO BEAUTIFUL...I LIKE~

Hi Dayna.
Great close-up capture, well done.
The focus, details, sharpness and depth of field are good.
Thanks for sharing.

Yasin.

Getting a lot better. Keep in mind that lens isnt made for macro, so dont push to hard. I think you still need a higher DoF.

PS: you might want to look into extension tubes for your lens, it will add macro just from spacing yourlens from the sensor, but you lose infity focus ntil you take it off again.

Or, try the really old trick. Take your lens, and hold it BACKWARDS over the lens mount and take the picture. It will give you extreme macro, but just use it wide open at first. You need to get real close to your subject to try this technique though.

Way better. Congratulations.
Good capture and colors.
Pierre

  • Great 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1493 W: 126 N: 2163] (19716)
  • [2006-08-16 17:16]
  • [+]

Nicely done, you're improving a lot. I like the feeling of your picture. Thanks.

Mario

Hey Dayna,
Lighting good
Composition really good
Increased DoF to make the back pair as clear as the front pair would be nice but this is still a pretty pic. It's amazing what one can do with a camara and a weed:-)
Thanx for posting
Terry

dayna,
nice macro shot. nice crisp color and detail.

The light is wonderfull in that work i agree!
Thats precise too! In new flower is about to open.. life is continious cycle by cycle :)

Lovely composition, almost an equal pair. I like the overall softness while some would say a little trouble with focus. The colors are really soft an the white is just like the natural burst of colors by nature.
Indeed one of the best to treasure, see you again, Richard

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4065)
  • [2007-03-26 5:43]
  • [+]

hi Dayna.
very nice macro.
well composed.
good light.
David

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