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Amber Shoemaker 2


Amber Shoemaker 2
Photo Information
Copyright: kyle cathey (izzzm) Silver Note Writer [C: 3 W: 0 N: 10] (400)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-12-03
Exposure: f/2.2, 1/30 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-12-07 4:19
Viewed: 974
Points: 10
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hello again!! here is the next photo from my session with Amber Shoemaker. What do you think?????????

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2004-12-07 9:23]

Kyle she has a striking gaze. I would like to see the color version, especially of that tattoo. I also think you could add some blur to the background to accentuate the subject more. Keep em coming.

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2004-12-07 13:01]

Sure, you did well with your work to capture this pose. Your model is good. There is so much you can do. I think some creativity from you will burst forth. How about it? :) :)
Well done

Mike

Nice composition.

she looks mean on this one :o)
good shot,nice colours and good composition.well done!

Hi Kyle, I like this shot, its colour-range, and the lights. I would drop more DOF to the background...
I like the contrast of the wild tatoo, pose, and the soft hair. All in all very good shot, congrats!
I also wish you a happy new year!
Cheers,
Marcie

the compo is great and the make up is fitting extremely great on Amber... nice model, you have, Kyle !!!!! a little shooting with Amber and Evana ??? ha ha !!!

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