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Kealani


Kealani
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Copyright: kyle cathey (izzzm) Silver Note Writer [C: 3 W: 0 N: 10] (400)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-05-31
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/2.1, 1/30 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Mood - Film Noir [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-07-23 12:46
Viewed: 1112
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is taken from my most recent session with model Kealani Bartley. This is from a series of shots that tell a story about a girl. The title is "Late last night" And this is "The Beginning"
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cool shot... like the grain and the expression of the lady... too bad the sigaret isn't lighted...

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-07-23 16:01]

Sad scene, nice to look at, the sigarette, the bottle, sad woman, good grainy shot, Kyle

great shot Kyle.... the way she looks down is a good point... the figure is lovely too... too bad that the cigarette is not lighted.... the halo would have been great here ... or maybe put a lighter in her hand close to the cigarette... like "i'm going to light it up"... see what i mean ?

You are really great with this type of photography Kyle, this is a brilliant shot, very emotional with incredibly dramatic colours, I love the grain.
Well done on another excellent shot!
::M::

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