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A Breakthrough Year


A Breakthrough Year
Photo Information
Copyright: Tim Bentz (Tim) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 188 W: 18 N: 241] (1137)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-11
Categories: Event, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Experimental, Action
Camera: FujiFilm S5000
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-05 19:05
Viewed: 633
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is Katie's breakthrough year. She graduates from high school and junior college both this year and my picture symbolizes her pursuit to the next chapter of her life. Katie is a good friend of the Bentz family.

God's best,

Tim

Tech: I photographed a torn peice of construction paper and lifted Katies picture from one of my favorite action soccer pictures from this season. Next, I copied & pasted her image over top of the other and worked the shadows until satisfied with the results.
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Hey, Tim, where ya been? Excelent rendition of the color one. I like the way you created this. Well done

Mike

Nice work, it looks like she's bursting through the wall.

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  • Miqra Gold Star Critiquer [C: 865 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-01-06 5:54]

Excellent idea and also excecuted profesionally, I like the monotone on this shot....What I like most is your 'prophetic utterance' about the year (smile) Well done!

Tim, terrific idea:) i love the details of the tear...even the tiny piece at her knee...well done!!

The emergong from the "decor" is very dynimic with her! it's fit very well. I like it...

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3265 W: 267 N: 7730] (32968)
  • [2005-01-12 19:46]

This is good Tim. Excellent tech work.

Great effort with this image Tim - a great result.

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