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Melissa


Melissa
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Copyright: Philip Gerald (philip) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 26 N: 176] (1320)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-27
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon D300 DSLR, 17-55mm Nikon f/2.8
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-09-01 22:45
Viewed: 383
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was taken about a week ago...Normally, I would not place the model in the frame like this but I wanted to include the lights. This is one of MANY that I liked and kept. As I said in a previous posting, Melissa was a great model and very natural. Hope you enjoy it!

Phil
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hello Phil
wonderful portrait
the place is lively
i like the offcenter composition with plenty of space left to the right
nice modle with a wonderful smile
the dress has sharp colours
i would like to include a little more of this modle uptill the waiste.

expouser is perfect.
alltogether an impressive shot

regards
Manuj Mehta

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 23 N: 1852] (11186)
  • [2008-09-02 10:37]

Hi Phil,
Lovely portrait in a beautiful setting.
Wonderful model with a lovely smile.....
Very good composition, colours and sharpness.

TFS and greetings from Netherland,
Adri

hi phil

excellent colours and lighting, very good details on the girl, a longer f-number might have made the detail on the wall and 2nd light better. i like the off centre placement and she seems to jump out the screen, almost beckoning me to follow her into the doorway, maybe thats my wishful thinking though, lol. very well composed, thanks.

regards c.d.

I like this portrait, the 'look' of the subject, quite direct, I probably would have cut the right, the rusty pipe does not 'add' to this image. I'm sure it would make this lovely portrait even stronger!
See WS for what I mean, hope you don't mind?
Thanx, M, (*_*)

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