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Grand Tetons


Grand Tetons
Photo Information
Copyright: Ronald Kelman (RSK) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 511 W: 131 N: 963] (7044)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-25
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D80 Digital SLR
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-08 7:17
Viewed: 196
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another view of the Tetons,hope my PP work is slightly improved,lightened the darker crop of trees left top as well as the small amount of bushes in the foreground & darkened very slightly the Tetons,using the curves tool,my PP work still needs improving but I think it's a better effort than last postings.

Ron

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Hi Ron,

I think that you should give yourself a pat on the back for this one the lake and the trees really make this a great scene. I like the reflections of the Tetons in the lake the colours are nice and strong sharp details good pov and dof well done.

Regards
Jon

Hi Ron,
I agree this looks better. I know how difficult it can be to do this correctly. I something zoom in to 400% and play around with the size and softness of the brush and still get stange edges.
This looks like it was taken close to Oxbob bend. I like the color of the Aspen tree and the almost silver look of the clouds above. The leaves on the Aspen must be still very new otherwise the turn into a much darker tone. The slight ripple in the water gives a nice distorded reflection.
TFS,
Niek

Hi Ronald,
Another fine capture of Tetons!
I like the greenery and the soft reflection on the water. Great lighting and details on the mountains. Maybe the sky needs some contrast! Anyway a pleasing result that makes a good postcard.
Good effort. This is a very difficult shot to handle with PP work.
I think you succeeded well.
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hi Ronald
Marvelous capture,fantastic view.
Very nice colours,good contrast and exposure,great lighting.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

and another excellent shot Ron realy nice pov with lake in front cant decide if it better than the lasdt as i like them both a lot tfs
regards bryan

Hi Ronald
wonderful landscape and perfect pov
lake, forest mountains
beautiful clouds and not easy light
but good work
ciao
Lucio

Brilliant work Ron! I honestly think this would make an awesome picture on the wall. Such fantastic tones and colours, quite a layered effect from the FG grass and water too. The reflections have come out well, and the cloud coverage adds quite a nice mood over the scene. Impressive job, looks like an amazing place to visit.

TFS,
Scott.

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 1 N: 472] (3756)
  • [2009-08-08 12:46]
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HI Ron, this is a postcard image. Wonderful in all its ways.I posted for all my friends in TL a flower arrangement. Itīs for you, too.
Regards Rose

A very nice landscape image with strong foreground and background items of interest. The tones and colors are very nice and there is nice detail in the clouds. I would consider using a smaller aperture for this type of image to increase the depth of field. TFS

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2009-08-08 21:43]
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Once again I love the composition and incredible detail. A gorgeous scene. TFS

Hi Ron
Nicely done considering the time of day. The PP worked well to give a boost to the mountains.
Phil

Hi Ron,
Beautiful landscape nicely composed and presented,
great colors and sharpness, Excellent POV./DoF. .
Nice reflection on water and details
a real post card...
Excellent done.
Michel

Wonderful landscape ,great colours, light and composition.
Zoran

Welcome Ronald,
very, very picturesque mountain landscape. Rocky Mountains in this place and such an approach presents a great. Very good light. Thank you for posting this photo.
Regards - Slawek

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