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Fantasia
Photo Information
Copyright: JeanLoup Castaigne (jloup) (88)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-06
Categories: Artwork
Camera: NIKON D 70, AF-S Nikkor 18-70mm
Exposure: f/3.8, 1/1600 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Flowers II [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-09-02 9:11
Viewed: 1112
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
22mm 3000*2000 pix @ 300dpi
Levels. Remove trash in the baground and number on the wall. Clone the grass here and there. Blur the background (Motion 90 then Gaussian). Unsharp the broom.
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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2004-09-02 10:17]
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Hello JeanLoup and welcome to TL. This is a crisp clear shot with good shadows. The additional broom on the right and some of the background is a little busy and distracting but you certainly used the correct dept of field to minimize it. Good shot and keep on shooting!

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  • Neige Gold Star Critiquer [C: 610 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-09-03 10:13]
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Well, this is an unusual flower pot, and there is two of them. - i would have put the two completely in the picture to show the whole setting. Or may be just one, cropping it differently and taken from a diferent angle - front?. Anyway, a sharp picture, funny to see. Kepp going.

Jean Loup, les couleurs vont nous preserver l'été (au moins ici dans le sud!). Et ce personnage est absolumment insolite (j'adore). J'imagine le tas de différents angles, vous pouvez le prendre.
Allez....j'attends les prochaines !

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