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Trainyard


Trainyard
Photo Information
Copyright: John Sieber (MT900spg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 431 W: 0 N: 138] (3863)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-15
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: Canon EOS Rebel XT (350D), Canon 18 - 55mm EFS
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-20 19:35
Viewed: 779
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a shot off the Missoula train yard from the Reserve Street bridge. Mount Sentinel is in the distance and it was a very clear day. I passed over this image originally as I did not like the grass field in the bottom left foreground. Thought I would see what others think and if there is a way to improve this shot.

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To shal: Re: TrainyardMT900spg 1 04-27 10:07
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Cool shot, John. As to the grass field in the foreground...being a train nut, I would prefer to see *more* trains, but that's okay! Actually, I like the whole composition - you really get the feel of a vast, flat valley before the mountains. Nice, sharp DOF and good POV. Well done.

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2006-02-20 23:08]

Hi John,
This really conveys the vastness of the country. I don't think the grass field is that much of a problem. You may try cropping a little bit from the bottom and may be from the right and see what you get.
Sunil

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  • shal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 46 N: 161] (1304)
  • [2006-04-27 0:15]
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Hey John,
excellent DOF you've attained here,
love the vastness of this image :)
Great work
Cheers TFS,
Vishal Sabharwal

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