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Copyright: pranab banik (pranab) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 734 W: 0 N: 537] (3141)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-26
Categories: Mood
Camera: Fujifilm FinepixA350
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-04-12 16:07
Viewed: 580
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It was a day of joy and freedom. I frolicked on the ground, I leaped in joy, I admired the beauty of nature. Now it is the end of the day and I must return to my reality and say goodbye to a wonderful gift which was given to me by nature. I leave not with a heavy heart but with appreciation and joy in my mind.
Taken at the end of my hike at Table Mountain.

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Merhaba Pranab.
Good compositions, congratulations.
I like this light and shadow.
Thank you for sharing.

[YaSiN]

colors are perfect...and composition with tree and lansdscape.

Great notes Pranab, wonderful photo, the play of the shawdows, the barren tree all lend an air of quiet and sadness. Your 'model' portrays the feelings very well, she has her head down like she is feeling sad. (I hope she was paid the standard model's fee...lol!!!) TFS,
Fran

I love the softness and time of day that you shot this picture. Looks very relaxing and happy.

Hi Pranab,
Walking toward the right hand side is going forward, while walking toward the left hand side is going back... She's for sure going home, yes!
Pleasant composition, my friend!
Easter Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3555 W: 736 N: 2391] (18990)
  • [2006-04-13 4:50]

Strong composition, Pranab !
Wonderful light, shadows and colours.
Very well done, my friend.


tfs and have a great day,
v

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  • mbaqir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 218 W: 329 N: 117] (980)
  • [2006-04-13 9:02]
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Hi Pranab
I like the composition of the tree in ths shot which is heavy on the right and weak in centre from where the main subject (your daughter) is standing. The light coming behind the trees casting good shade on the ground. Your daughter seems moving slowly must be thinking of a good trip. The note is useful as well.

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2006-04-13 14:15]

The photograph looks sad somehow. The lengthening shadows heighten the effect. The tree seems to bid farewell to the 'Lucy' ...
Salilda

Hi Pranab,
it's a wonderful shot! Almost a painting! Colours and composition are so unreal, perfect that I would be sure it wasn't a photo. But it is! tfs

Marek

In the shadow of the tree
Your daughter’s body language tells me that she had enough for that day.
This is a real fine composition
RuudBlok

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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2006-04-14 14:52]

You always think possitively,which is the best thing about you,,,
as far as picture's concern it is the best pic of the day..wonderfull composition,,i like atmosphere out there..
very well done..
thanks for sharing
Love
mugush

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  • jacobo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 666 W: 31 N: 673] (4875)
  • [2006-04-15 12:36]

Nice colours and good compo.
Best regards to you and your family.
Jacobo

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  • sufi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 720 W: 7 N: 106] (1336)
  • [2006-04-15 15:57]

Hi Pranab...
Wonderful theatrical scene and composition...
Also wonderful colors and light... The Tree's silhouette and shadow are perfect... Also perfect shot as usual...
TFS...
Stay well..
Salim.
PS: Thank you very much for your comment on Life is a Miracle-Ocean Flowers

Hi Pranab,
this is really a great capture. I agree with the others that the colours are lovely, but as soon as I saw this one, I imagined it in B&W...it brings out the mood created by superb moment and composition. I did a WS to show you, hope you don't mind!
wonderful!
Marija

Hi,
Nice place with great colours!
Excellent sharpness,focus,POV and light!
Thanks Ana:)

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 690 W: 60 N: 50] (332)
  • [2006-04-23 2:32]

Hi Pranab,
woow I like this pictures sense . very good light management and again very good sharpness. Congratulations. TFS
B.Erek
Meaning Sense :-))
Framing :-))
Idea :-))

Pranab,
Great composition, the girl could have more light and detail. I like the long shadows and the angle of the hillside (Mountain). Nice work,
Scott

Nice sentiments, nice day, nice photo!

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