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Copyright: Victor Assuncao (va2ho) (38)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-03
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Olympus C750 UZ
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Skies: Sunrise, Sunset.. [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-04-16 15:17
Viewed: 476
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken in the art gallery of the University of Washington. In the art gallery we can see this oval view of the sky
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I like this simple shape and colour, though I would have cropped off the curves at the bottom by cropping right and left to just inside where the curve starts. At first I thought the photo was of a bird's egg. I also like the pattern of the light wispy clouds swirling in the blue sky.

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  • Judy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 94 N: 153] (529)
  • [2004-04-16 17:27]

Welcome to TL Victor. It was quite a strange looking thumbnail, so I went to have a look. Your note makes this quite interesting. I have never seen a skylight quite like this. I agree with Joan though. You could crop a bit and also try to increase saturation or equalize to make the sky more striking. IMHO, there is a little too much grey around it. You could probably also rotate about 2 degrees CCW - that would balance it out since the lines are so simple and it is tilting a bit to the right. Otherwise very interesting.

When I saw the thumbnail I thougt it was a picture of a toilet bowl. LOL. I really like the simplicity of it and especially the smoothness of it.

Simple, yet striking composition. Nice idea.

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