JUMP!

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• PavelL (1295)
• [2006-04-30 15:24]
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Hi Annetta!
Is Me Bunce your child?
Very good photo! It is very artistic photo!
PavelL

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• kitflorendo (0)
• [2006-04-30 21:59]
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OK!!
The content is very good and the angular positions of the bodies score highly. The missing head could be seen as a very serious omission?
PP is OK but maybe not necessary? Don't know. Original unseen.
Here's a final downer for you. Text in the image ... not a good idea.
Here's a final upper for you. The transition from flowery stuff to part three of the journey has been made and, while it may have been painful so far for you, the journey now gets easier with each step. If the girl's head had been 'in', this would have been a high-scoring image. Next time?
Nicely fat frame ;)
How about ... running water. No flowers, no swans, ducks, but as much or as little pp as you like?

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• gaylen54 (0)
• [2006-05-01 10:06]

I think this is fabulous! The "missing head" makes it more interesting, imo!

Funny how I can tell that Ian is smiling. Great composition and capture of action.

I'm really glad you had that surgery, Annetta. You're feeling MUCH better, I can tell!

Gayle :)

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• anavazao (4156)
• [2006-05-01 13:47]

wow,
nice work on shot!
It's very funny! Good colours, composition, details, light....
thanks Ana:)