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Copyright: Annetta Bunce (ABunce) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 166 W: 32 N: 60] (1277)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-05
Categories: Daily Life, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Fuji Finepix S3000
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-05 23:14
Viewed: 566
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A detail of my motorcycle.

Don't know if it's lateral enough, Kit. But not too feminine! ;)
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I like how you composed this very bold. I am not too excited about the frame you used but I really like the crop. The details of the bolts/nuts are great. The pp is good but without it i believe it would also be great as the composition is good.

Anneta, superb saturation for this kind of composition,Regards, Rafael

Apologies if it seems that I have been neglecting you. Not my intention but just been overloaded.
Bold! Strrrrrong! A little over-pp'd MAYBE. Would probably have been good with just SOME saturation. Yes, the lateral thinking exercise is coming along nicely. This is VERY unexpected. Good subject and a good hard close-up/crop.
Now, frames. What this needs to add some finesse to the assembly is that there should be a very thin white line at image edge and THEN the fat black outside. This one blends in with the image and causes some eye-confusion, whereas an inner white line (very thin) would prevent that problem.
Good. I look forward to the next one and I know that you have posted more. I'll get back to you in turn. There are so many waiting ;)

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