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Fruit-T
Photo Information
Copyright: Hugh Siegel (bombilla) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 85 N: 147] (1950)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-11
Categories: Daily Life, Food, Nature, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon N50, Nikkor 35mm f2.8, Nikon L1A
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-12 10:09
Viewed: 641
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The pineapple of my eye.
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To hcezar: Obrigado, Cezarbombilla 1 02-13 09:19
To anducina: Thanks, Andreeabombilla 1 02-13 09:17
To rokoslav: Hi, Rokobombilla 1 02-13 09:16
To Silke: Thanks, Silkebombilla 1 02-13 09:15
To rewshearer: Good suggestionbombilla 1 02-12 13:46
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  • Great 
  • hcezar Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 83 W: 0 N: 24] (145)
  • [2007-02-12 11:28]
  • [2] [+]

Hi Hugh. Linda imagem.a expressão da moça e sua vestimenta dão um contraste bem legal a imagem.Acho que no canto direito abaixo a caixa de papelão amarela está tirando um pouco o foco da composição central.Se a modelo desse um passo atrás pegaria só as frutas.Parabéns e um abraço.

Excellent compo and colors, nice portrait.

TFS,

Andreea

Not bad work! Good placement of Traci within the frame, good use of available light. Sharpness is excellent.
If I had a suggestion for a portrait like this it would be a tighter crop - just below the chin and just above the hat, making it a more intimate shot with closer connection between subject and viewer. I haven't seen too many like that of Traci, usually it's head-and-shoulders-and-background.
Just a suggestion!
Rew

Great portrait. Pineapple of your eye among ordinary apples. Must be quite cold in New York.

  • Great 
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5947] (23588)
  • [2007-02-13 4:44]
  • [+]

Very clever title and notes and a great portrait of a beautiful lady!
TFS
Silke
(back with :)

hello hugh!
beautiful portrait!!!
tfs
zoran

pt

  • Great 
  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1410 W: 275 N: 1955] (12042)
  • [2007-02-23 17:11]

Hi Hugh.
Very interesting portrait.
Looks good to me.
Good moment captured.
Best of Luck!
J-23

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