After the Storm

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• michiels (1593)
• [2007-02-20 12:10]
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hello Hugh,

I would not like to clean here :((((
I like the composition, although i would like to see the photo without the iron things on the right side up.
many greetings,inn

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• Aazragi (1522)
• [2007-02-20 13:01]

Hi Hugh
Nice shot, (a very hard work for police if the thief go from this way to find ) Nice idea good work.
Well done and keep it up.
My best wishes are always with you.
Regards,
M. Latif.

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-02-20 13:08]
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Hello Hugh! Great idea, nasty floor! I really like the inclusion of those moving feet at the top, perhaps, to give the photo more focus and continuity, crop the photo to give a long vertical cropping of the floor with the feet at the top edge. Good clarity though and very well-seen, looks almost textured and abstract. TFS! I posted a workshop, hope you like it!
-Lara

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• salil (2106)
• [2007-02-20 13:21]

At first I missed the idea ... thought it was the patter on the tiles.
Good idea and good execution, Hugh.
Salil

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• rewshearer (20962)
• [2007-02-20 13:33]

I must have a measure of evil in me, I was looking for skids. I just know a floor like that will be slippery and I was hoping to see a sign of uncontrolled slippage. :) I think I spotted some, bottom right.
Very cool shot, a simple and singleminded focus here, delivering an interesting view. The glimpse of turnstile, wall, and approaching feet add to the shot without dominating.
Well done!
Rew

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• rokoslav (1829)
• [2007-02-20 13:56]

Great shot! So very realistic!

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• csuebele (5399)
• [2007-02-20 17:21]

What a mess! Good shot.

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• Alba (2760)
• [2007-02-21 3:59]
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Hi Hugh,
I like very much the lights on the ground, leading to the entrance and framing the advancing feet.
Good idea to show that mess as an abstract canvas.
Mary