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Elephant
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Copyright: Troy Redington (TroyTime) (67)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-23
Categories: Pets
Camera: NIKON CP 5700
Exposure: f/4, 1/133 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-29 12:25
Viewed: 450
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
See the size of those mud bunnies!?
I'd like to see a dung beetle roll those things away.
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Welcome to TL Troy! Good idea for a shot, and you really have good clarity and sharp quality in this. The shallow depth of field makes the elephant pop out at the viewer, which is very effective. Although I kind of like the composition as is, I would recommend trying to get the whole tail in at the left edge since letting subjects in the photo touch the edge breaks the continuity and composition, the eye cannot move all the way around the shot. Try also creating or cropping the shot so that the elephant is not right in the center of the photo, which makes the photo not as interesting as it could be. BUT, really a very good quality shot and I like the use of diffused soft natural lighting that helps with the good exposure. Thanks for sharing and hope to see more from you!
-Lara

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