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Wine Trio


Wine Trio
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Copyright: Michel Lamy (Frenchy) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 114 W: 4 N: 8] (1272)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-01
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sigma SD9, Sigma 18-55mm / f3.3-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-04 10:40
Viewed: 900
Points: 24
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  • Great 
  • ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760)
  • [2004-04-04 11:02]

Great idea! Very creative shot. First I thougt, on the thumbnail basis, that it was a post-processing "cut and paste" work! But, no, it's a well done setting-in-scene.
I think colors are a little bit "flat" and that the glass in front could be some more sharp, but no matter, I give smile for the idea!

  • Great 
  • KSD Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 0] (84)
  • [2004-04-04 13:04]

Great Picture.
Good idea.
I like your idea.

High points for creative thinking! Why dont you try using more subtle coloured lighting, perhaps even suspend a candle inside the glass? That would be an interesting twist.

  • Great 
  • Jep Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 131 W: 16 N: 97] (585)
  • [2004-04-04 15:39]

Oh very fine composition Michel - good idea and well done - I must try to think the same way, now we got this place to post and get critique.

bienvu l'effet de perspective

Bien pensé, bien vu et bien réalisé.... peut-être un peu terne comme couleur cependant.

how abstract! wish i had that idea... now i've got to find another great shot...

thumbs up ;-)

what did you do with the background? it seems that the floor fades over in the wall, or there's some kind of curve in it instead of straight walls?

Very nice composition and lighting efect.
The color saturation is moody and works.
You've used some kind of paper as background I think... Some note would be just great!
Well done

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  • moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485)
  • [2004-05-28 1:24]

Very good composition, this is a very well thought out and executed shot, with excellent results, I like the wine in the last glass as well as the sepia colour.
A very pleasing shot, a note would have been nice.
::M::

Original photo. Nice background. Great !

  • Great 
  • pdp Gold Star Critiquer [C: 110 W: 39 N: 123] (538)
  • [2004-07-18 17:28]

A good idea well executed. I like it. Well done!

First I like the creativity second I like wine too. Before you start a photo like this you have to think and play, make a composition. Then you pick the best and ask yourself what thinks the rest of the world. I think its good.

  • Great 
  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 968 W: 99 N: 2233] (11247)
  • [2009-08-15 13:33]

Not only creative Michel, but also well executed.
I think there is still a challenge for you here.
The reflections of the light(s) (the white spots) in the glasses. If there is a way to get rid of them you would have a perfect picture!

I really like how you focus on the third glass with the "wine" in it. Good work!

Cheers,
Anneke

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