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| These are two rappers from the Twin Cities who came to Winona for a show, I don't know their names but they were really good. I liked the lens flares that I got from the stage lights and the red tint as well. |
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Hey Jeff nice capture of the rappers in action. The following are only personal opinions and preferences. The hand of the guy on the left of the picture is not in the shot, which is bad in general but specifically bad for this picture because rapping is a lot about attitude and the person singing it hence if the person is not fully shown in the shot it does terrible things to the picture. The flare is not to my liking either, yes some of the lines in the shot are nice but the purple stripe on the right distracts me a lot, the black band in the center is quite distracting too. There's also too much space between the rappers in the center of the picture which is distracting to the viewer too. I like the red colour of the shot, but I've done a ws with a different tint and some added noise, hope you like it. TFS.
Ravi.
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