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Happy Fathers Day


Happy Fathers Day
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Copyright: Adnan Mirza (adnanmirza) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 1 N: 4] (32)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1988
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Yashica Electro 35 GSN
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-06-17 0:24
Viewed: 762
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Happy Fathers Day to you all,

Well, we all celebrate the Fathers day, and we all present gifts to the father, but actually unstead of this we must help those who do not have his father, this world is selfish, and if some one do not have his father, hoe can he survive with this world, we all must have to help poors, and those who cannot even afford food, aaaaaaaaahhh affording cloth is so far, listen we all are in this world not beacuse we have to live for our self, we have to live for those who cannot do some thing that we can do, so if we have power, we must use it for the betterment of poors, in this case we do not need much power, if 10 men helping 1 man, then i think that is not a business of loss, 20 men helping 2 men, and similar to this if we help starting, i bet you day this world will like a heaven, sotp jelousy, stop crime, stop taking drugs, stop every thing thaat can destroy our future and our generation, all we have to do is earn like a gentle men, surve like a gentelmen, and help like a gentlemen, so we will say before out death, that i have survived a beautiful life helping others, that what all i wanted to do, now i am proud to accept the death,

thank you for you kind time

Adnan Mirza


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  • AKF Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 13 N: 77] (576)
  • [2007-06-18 15:27]
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I agree with everything you said and I'm glad you came out and spoke your mind like that. We should always speak our mind in these cases and especially help those in need. Thank you for the beautiful note, Adnan.

As to the photo, it has an interesting pov and I like your father's expression, it is very thoughtful. My complaint could be the brightness of the photo. It is very bright which is why we can't see the details of the background or of your father's face. Perhaps an increase in contrast and decrease in brightness? I like the lighting, the direction it is coming from and so on, just not the amount of it hahaha.

Hope you had a nice father's day.

Adelicia

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