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vases in the sun


vases in the sun
Photo Information
Copyright: Jim Thompson (kernow) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 20 W: 1 N: 27] (265)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Fuji Finepix 6900z, Smart Card
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/315 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-10 0:12
Viewed: 353
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Took this photo inside a local Crate & Barrel store, they promptly threw me out for taking a photograph in their store.

I would have liked longer to experiment with angles.

In Photoshop I removed some of the background to the right side of the green vase. In Irfanview I brightened the photo and increased the contrast slightly.
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To tommy: Yes, I agree with your thoughts on the compositiokernow 1 03-11 21:57
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Nice composition, I would say you need a better background and that's all. Or maybe you wanted to include this landscape behind the bottles? If you removed som of background, maybe would be good to put there something else instead? Take care

Piotr

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  • tommy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 28] (202)
  • [2005-03-11 20:36]
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I like how you picked the colours, the green and blue works well here, but the bottle behind the blue one should have been taken out of the frame (IMO) but never the less good image.

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