<< Previous Next >>

Coil


Coil
Photo Information
Copyright: Karen Smith (karith) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1171] (7409)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-04
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Event
Camera: Canon PowerShot S50
Exposure: f/4.9, 1/8 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Minimalism [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-08-27 12:19
Viewed: 417
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is one of the decorations at an indoor circus exhibit at a local science museum. The background of draped cloth formed a tent-like area for small children to play in. I liked the metalic look of the coils against the simple and soft look of the cloth that was lit from inside as well as outside.

PP: adjusted contrast, resized, sharpened, added border.

jmcl has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Redrubin: Sharpnesskarith 1 01-31 08:12
To dbp: Lightkarith 1 09-02 21:59
To Freddie: Simplekarith 1 08-28 08:57
To jmcl: Intriguingkarith 1 08-28 08:51
To rewshearer: Shadowkarith 1 08-27 16:23
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Good sharpness and metering, an eyecatching semi-abstract.
So is that the shadow of a child's head I can see on the left??
Nice work
Rew

  • Great 
  • jmcl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 261 W: 4 N: 204] (656)
  • [2007-08-27 21:24]
  • [+]

Hi Karen,

I love how it is angled into the frame .. you have really shown it well ..
The colors are tremendous ...
I find the shadows? really intriguing.
I actually think you could have even sharpened it more ..
Wonderful image.

take care,

John

Hi Karen! I like the simple shot w/ nice perspective and color. Your exposure time created a bit of motion blur, you can mend it in the sharpening filters in photoshop.
TFS,
Freddie :)

  • Great 
  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4065)
  • [2007-09-01 11:06]
  • [+]

hi Karen
excellent shot
great pov and light catch
regards
David

good sharpness and colours
well done
ciao
Lucio

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF