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playing with passion


playing with passion
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Copyright: marvin holmes (daydreamer1) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 2 N: 0] (107)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-07
Categories: Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Music in a Photo [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-10 18:27
Viewed: 425
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
i took the original photo and tried to create some thing diffrent to use in my office
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  • eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420)
  • [2007-09-10 23:00]

Hi Marvin,

very interesting work. It looks like a poster. I like the colours. Good musician's expression seen in his pose and on his face. I dislike his central placement - I think it would be better to change the POV in the way he is placed on the right and on the left there is whole (I believe) frame with the text of which now we can see only ending letters. Anyways I still like this work. tfs

Marek

nice image, with an effect very unussual, i like it so much... congratulations by the result here... TFS... Fer Ortega...

Hi Marvin
Interesting work - its good to experiment. A good composition with the strong green horizontals and verticals framing the musician
Greetings from Greece
Phil

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