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Copyright: II II (Riz) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 194 W: 31 N: 100] (523)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2001-10-10
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Action
Camera: Nikon F5, 18-35mm/D f/3.5-4.5, Polarizer
Exposure: f/4, 1/40 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-04-02 14:01
Viewed: 1296
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This Aviation Machinist Mate watches from inside an S-3B Viking as an SH-46 Sea King flys away after delivering supplies as part of a vertical replentishment (VERTREP) on the flight deck of USS Enterprise (CVN 65).
She was very helpful in allowing me to get this picture. I didn't have much room, to work with. I shot three pictures and I'm not allowed to show inside the plane's control panel, so I exposed for the outside to darken the panel.
I wanted to get movement of the helo's blades, I used the seat as a tripod if you will. It was so noisy and windy outside and I 'd figured this would make a better shot.

Check out the Workshop its the original photo.
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PS7 work I made an adjustment layer for the bw tones
-burned and dodged a little and cropped of course.
and the frame.

I hope you like the different point of view I have brought to TL.

Have a great weekend to all!
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this shot is awesome i love it____ great angles and subject matter, very interesting

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  • Peeotr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 148 N: 322] (2301)
  • [2005-04-02 14:21]

A great thing to be in such place, and to be able to take a photo. Congratulations for this. The composition is perfect, with the tower, helicopters and the woman. Good work.

Piotr

Exellent photojournal style photography. I love everything about this shot. Good work!

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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2005-04-02 14:32]

Lovely shot with all the drama of being part of the scene. Great work.

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  • yttt Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 270 W: 10 N: 3] (2114)
  • [2005-04-02 14:40]

exelent !!! my highest respect !

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  • zan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 150 W: 44 N: 1] (56)
  • [2005-04-02 16:04]

I find this picure very interesting, it gives me some thoughts about man and machin. Very good framing creats 3 different photos here, I like the wide angle and the b/w.


Liron.

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  • Tim Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 188 W: 18 N: 241] (1137)
  • [2005-04-03 22:09]

Awesome shot Dave! I like it very much. TFS and God's best.

Tim

Excellent! The military shot are great keep them coming.

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  • joker Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 17 N: 45] (889)
  • [2005-04-05 4:10]

Great military shot. It's very interesting to have a look from the pilot's point of view, this makes me a participant of things that going on, which is the goal of a photojournalism, i think. Great job.

Salut !
Tes images sont superbes, très dynamiques, très impressionnantes, certaines sont (je pèse mes mots) à couper le souffle. Celles-ci me plait beaucoup, elle a un aspect futuriste, elle me fait penser à certaines scènes de « Stars Wars » ! J’ai vu la version couleur, mais je préfère de loin la version B&W, je trouve que cela décontextualise la scène, on n’est plus sur un porte-avions, mais presque sur un vaisseau spatial.
Bravo pour cette image en particulier, mais aussi bravo pour ton travail en général, c’est un témoignage fort !
Jean-Louis

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 10 N: 738] (10739)
  • [2005-07-03 22:43]

Hi Riz,
This is an awsome picture, partly because I will never be able to capture one like this. The composition shows the high energy activity that takes place on a carrier deck. Controlled madness! Well done and thanks for sharing.

Very nice composition and good b&w shot. Bravo.

Steph.

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