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Critiques [Translate]
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 150 W: 44 N: 1]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-n.gif){kind=small}
Very nice macro, I like the angle you chose for it, maybe you should try the same angle with greater DOF.
Liron.
A heavy view on this bass-guitar, artistic in this way, nice seen from here, nice done !
- vsinopoulos
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2130 W: 40 N: 2168]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(13115) - [2005-04-04 14:12]
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Excellent close-up, great use of DOF and very good colors and lighting.
Well done!
Vassilis
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 0 N: 19]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-s.gif){kind=small}
It is a full of life photo. I like that strong perspective, the brihtness of the metal and the contrast with that wood colour. Jose Angel
Belle composition graphique! Photo originale et creative! Tres bien faite!
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- technogran
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 602 W: 210 N: 827]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(5525) - [2005-04-04 20:02]
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An attractive and graphic close up of your bass. I like the point of view you have used here. It dramatizes the shot. The colours are nice and I like the contrast between the metal and the wood also. Very well done.
A good series. Nice angle you explored. Good composition and actually an abstract work, in a way.
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- carmem_busko
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- [2005-04-05 10:23]
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Very good cropping and macro. Nice perspective and colors.
Rgds,
carmem
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 39 W: 0 N: 4]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-n.gif){kind=small}
nice ! I play the bass, too! I own a Jackson PS-5. Do you know Phil lesh ? he's my favourite bass player ever. nice picture !
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 112 W: 5 N: 99]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif){kind=small}
this is a great (and very unique!) macro shot of your bass, JP! i like the vibrant colour of the wood too.
- Tina
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- cloverstar
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 3907 W: 0 N: 0]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif)
(0) - [2005-04-06 20:49]
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Very nice perspective composition. Well done.
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- ndb1958
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 364 W: 0 N: 44]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-s.gif)
(2036) - [2005-04-10 1:58]
Hi Jean Pierre, very nice detai.
Very grafical and artful. Light, colour and shdows work well. Like it very much. Great composition.
Bon angle de vue de cet instrument musical. Le seul détail qui personnellement me gène un peu est que la photo penche légèrement sur la droite.
Bye. Francis
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- karass (35)
- [2005-04-12 18:41]
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Nice macro here. Blured wires looks like vibration over pickups. I like contrast between blue on pick-ups and red pattern of wood. Very interested detail is rust on the screw in the middle of the picture.
P.S.
I'm also bass player, and I have Fender Precision ('74). U R courage me now for few shots of this amazing instrument. Thanks for input Jean Pierre.
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 380 W: 95 N: 208]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-n.gif){kind=small}
HI Jean Pierre,
I like this very creatif overview you have chosen here.
Regards,
Paul
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Great picture. I like the angle, a lot. The only other thing i would try is to pull the strings and make the vibrate a bit. I might try that in workshop later, if I get time. Nice work.