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• juulbaars (3831)
• [2007-11-15 13:34]

what a depth

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• boonie (7679)
• [2007-11-15 17:28]

Jessica this is a fine example of a deminishing perspective. Your choice of B & W is very effective. Additonally, the sky adds an interesting element - bravo

Dan

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• Silke (23588)
• [2007-11-16 4:19]
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Hello Jessica
The idea here is really cool: lots of perspective, very graphical composition and lots of cool textures. I also like the rather original framing which picks up the textures in the photo and repeats them -- very well done indeed. May I ask how you created that frame?

I hope to see lots more postings from you....

A few tips to make it easier and more fun to be a member of this odd little community:
- Always write more than 4 lines of NOTES. That allows members to give you points for usefulness and gives them a chance to learn more too!
- Each time you post a picture, take the time to visit at least 10 pictures in the Gallery to write a critique of the works of other photographers. Observing (and critiquing) the successes and errors of other members make for great opportunities to learn!
- Make use of the workshop (you’ll learn more about your own strengths and weaknesses by helping others improve)
- Read ABOUT (and FAQ)!
I am sure that these ideas will help you make the most of your stay on the site!!

TFS

And thanks for your kind comment on my "Hot Jazz"

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-11-16 8:57]
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nice powerful shot
the black and white makes it more very powerful
and i dont think u should write at least 4 lines of notes
let the picture speaks for itself

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• Hitbit (5872)
• [2007-11-16 9:00]

Great shot Sabrina I love the B/W here it works very well. The depth you captured is amazing. I love it.

Tfs
Grtz Pim

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• Ananfoto (0)
• [2007-11-16 9:18]

Hi Jessica...>
Nice presentation with this beautiful black and white picture...>well done...>

Salute....>
Anan

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• Ruut (1277)
• [2007-11-17 1:58]

Hi Jessica,
Very nice B&W picture due to perspective. No words to be told with this one,
Ruut

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• Ash249 (1708)
• [2007-12-03 12:58]

Hi Jessica, this is a stunning picture. The depth of the image almost pulls you into the scene, the vignetting is perfect.

Take care, Gary

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• wenqing (11857)
• [2007-12-08 6:28]

i like this comp and POV jessica :)
very good presentation
the b/w is perfect for this, nice mood and tones

koh

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• tlacoyoweb (786)
• [2008-01-04 5:17]
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• jamfest (4243)
• [2008-07-06 12:03]

Very nice Jesse. Well composed, with great DOF. Well suited for B&W. The sky adds to the overall interest/appeal.

TFS,
David

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• juanrobleda (39)
• [2008-09-22 18:23]
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